Below I am going to embed our team interview and I am also going to be evaluating it, you will also find out whether our film idea got commissioned or not;
So after watching the video you will have found out that our film didn't get commissioned I am now going to evaluate it and explain why.
Throughout the interview we talked about our film idea including the plot, character profile, costume, locations, props etc.
At the end of the interview we all received feedback for the teacher telling us what we needed to do to improve our film idea and he also asked us questions to clear up a few things that he didn't understand.
The reason our film didn't get commissioned was because we didn't have "enough meat on the bones" of our plot. There were many parts of our film idea that were very good and certain aspects of our film that we could make look very professional. However, there were certain aspects of our film that weren't so good. For example, the part of the story that involved the teddy bear wasn't very well thought out. We had to make sure that no one would get confused about the significance of the teddy bear we had to try and strategically make it clear that the bear represents Carly and the fact that she is no longer in Jack's life.
After we received the feedback we then had to go away as a team and talk through how to improve the film idea and put more "meat on the bones."
Here I am going to embed the presentation that we used for our short film idea;
My Film Pitch by Anonymous lrhZifQ on Scribd
My next post will be the update of the commissioning interview and talk through the improvements that we have made as a team.
